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Anatomy of FCAT Failure: School Districts Didn't Read or Heed Writing on the Wall

By: Kenric Ward | Posted: May 17, 2012 3:55 AM
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Kamela Patton and Amber Winkler

School districts attempting to blame the state Department of Education for their dismal performance on the FCAT writing exam are lamely reaching for a "dog-ate-my-homework" cop-out.

Back on July 5, 2011, all districts were sent a memo advising that the 2012 test would be more rigorously graded than previous versions.

"It wasn't a secret," DOE spokeswoman Jamie Mongiovi told Sunshine State News on Wednesday. The memo, headed "Changes to FCAT Writing," spelled out how student essays would face tougher grading on spelling, punctuation, grammar and overall essay construction.

Districts were also informed that the passing grade would be raised from 3.0 to 4.0.

Still, district superintendents whined on Wednesday about "miscommunication" from Tallahassee.

"Somewhere there's a miss. Somewhere there's a disconnect," Collier Superintendent Kamela Patton complained to her hometown paper, the Naples Daily News. "There's no way scores drop 50-to-60 points."

Yet the precipitous decline in scores into the 30 percent range -- down from the 80 percent of previous years -- should have been no surprise in districts where local officials ignored the DOE's warnings and failed to take proactive action in the eight months leading up to FCAT.

Ruth Melton, director of legislative relations at the Florida School Boards Association, said DOE warned districts they were going to face a different, and stricter, grading regimen this year.

Melton specifically said districts were informed there would be emphasis on grammar, punctuation and spelling that downplayed the prevailing pedagogy of so-called "whole language," which de-emphasizes those skills and relies on more free-flowing expression and such computer-based tools as spell-check.

Classroom instructors at districts contacted by Sunshine State News confirmed that DOE's tough message had been sent and received. But though the message was the same, not every district responded in the same way. In some cases, old instructional materials, and old thinking, prevailed -- to the detriment of students.

"It was clear you had to get a 4.0 instead of a 3.0 (to pass), but some districts were still stuck in what they've done in the past," a source told Sunshine State News on condition of anonymity.

Bowing to pressure from districts and parents, the state Board of Education, meeting in emergency session on Tuesday, voted to lower the passing score to 3.0 in an effort to hold districts "harmless." That nearly 20 percent inflation in the passing standard meant that roughly 80 percent of students would pass the test -- putting the passage rate nearly back to where it was in the 2011 exams.

But, as Sunshine State News previously reported, an inexplicable chasm has long existed between the lusty passing rates on FCAT writing tests and those of FCAT reading results, which historically run around 40 percent in elementary grades and the low 30 percent range in high school.

The results from the 2012 writing battery -- poor as they were -- were more closely aligned with the reading scores, which national test experts say is more scientifically credible. Students in fourth-, eighth- and 10th-grades sit for the writing tests, though passage is not required for grade advancement or graduation.

Amber Winkler, an education researcher with the Thomas B, Fordham Institute in New York City, said, "Like it or not, there are real consequences to raising expectations, including that many kids won’t be able to meet those expectations initially, but it is best to ratchet them up than be content with the status quo or cave in to political pressure."

See the DOE's letter to school districts about the 2012 FCAT writing exam here.



Contact Kenric Ward at kward@sunshinestatenews.com or at (772) 801-5341
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Comments (19)

Lloyd Brumfield
12:17PM OCT 23RD 2012
I can not find your writings after about early June.
School Administrator
9:35AM MAY 18TH 2012
The issue is not with raising the passing grade to a 4.0 or emphasizing correct grammar and punctuation. The issue was doing all of this at the same time.
The article states "Yet the precipitous decline in scores into the 30 percent range -- down from the 80 percent of previous years -- should have been no surprise in districts where local officials ignored the DOE's warnings and failed to take proactive action in the eight months leading up to FCAT."
Eight months is not enough time for newly implemented programs to effect the current years scores. It would have been more practical to implement the tougher grading and leave the passing score at the previous level which is what was accomplished in the emergency meeting. The emergency meeting was held so that the board could correct their mistake of implementing too many changes too quickly.
Stephen
1:27PM MAY 19TH 2012
Why do school administrators have more excuses than they have educated students? The reality is that you have not prepared students from the beginning. It didn't "just happen" this year. All of you should be fired and working at a drive thru.
RK Armour
6:05PM MAY 17TH 2012
What's wrong with Florida raising the bar? Why are educators complaining? Practice makes perfect. Obviously there has been little to no practice of written composition on a day-to-day basis. Cramming grammar and spelling lessons at the last minute is not the solution. Good writing must be a practice, and all school districts should raise the bar for their teachers. Train the teachers how to teach writing, and students will learn. It takes a combined effort.
Educator
5:23PM MAY 17TH 2012
Shame on you! Your article demonstrates how little you understand educating children. Each year of education builds on the next. Our teachers have been trained to teach students how to brain storm and write a wonderful draft, not focusing on the conventions of writing. This is what the state expected and demanded. Students who did otherwise received lower scores. All that was expected to be "untaught" in a few months. Impossible!
Frank
1:25PM MAY 19TH 2012
Way to go Educator. Having the ability to brain storm, aka, b.s., will take our students far in life and help get them into college. They should be taught the basics from Kindergarten on up. Your statement is appalling and hopefully you decide you leave education, since you are clearly part of the problem, and not the solution. Perhaps you can brain storm about another career.
Fran
8:59AM MAY 18TH 2012
Actually Educator, the shame is on you. You have known all along that they would not be writing a "draft" for their FCAT writing section. Your excuse about them only being able to do a draft is pure baloney. All of us were trained to write in school within timed segments. The reality is that you don't teach spelling, grammer, punctuation and behavior to students in your classrooms. YOU ALLOW THEM TO FAIL. Shame on you. Let's lower the standard a bit more and just give them an FCAT on texting and cursing out adults.
irishrose85
5:49PM MAY 18TH 2012
Fran
As an educator in the classroom, I can tell you that I taught grammar everyday that I met with my students. We worked on grammar for at least 25% of every class period. Now, I challenge you to write a polished piece of writing in 45 minutes on a topic with which you may or may not be familiar. The research writing - over 30 years worth - indicates that quality writing is a process. Ask K. Ward how long it took to write this editorial. My guess is that this opinion column went through several revisions before it was a polished piece. As I said earlier I have no problem raising the bar, but it should be consistent with what the research says about how quality writing is created.
Fran
1:21PM MAY 19TH 2012
Fran, I am also an educator, with advanced degrees. As a student, I also took timed exams for writing samples. I can assure you, that they looked nothing like we see today. This opinion column, even in it's draft stage would have more than passed the FCAT writing standard. While writing is a process, we no longer teach or care about spelling, grammer or punctuation. A recent Florida teaching exam questions was about the best way to assist a student with spelling problems. The correct answer was NOT to teach them spelling, but to allow them to USE SPELL CHECK. The problems there are obvious. I am mortified when I receive documents and training materials from the district office that are poorly written, with grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors. I had one high ranking district official who had to hand write one brief sentence and managed to spell 3 words incorrectly. Florida has the worst educational system I have seen, and I have lived in many parts of the country. As an educator, I am ashamed of what the state of Florida has laid out for these students.
irishrose85
4:11PM MAY 17TH 2012
As a 10 grade writing and English teacher, I feel that I must respond to your editorial. 2012 is not the first year of the increased cut score. It is the second year of the cut score being 4.0. For the 2009-10, the state eliminated the 2nd reader and so a 3.5 was no longer possible. FCAT writes scores for 2010 were an average of 3.0 and 4.0. Then for the 2010-11 school year, the cut score was increased to a 4.0. In 2011 over 80% of students earned a 4.0. You are correct that in August 2011, schools and districts were notified that while the rubric would not change, it would be more difficult to earn a 4.0 as the scores would pay greater attention to grammar and punctuation as well as sentence structure and development of support. However, we did not have any sample anchor papers that correlated to the new standard. Finally, in October 2011, districts received revised calibration papers to illustrate the shift. In past years I have had a multitude ( well over 30-40 samples at each score point) to use as models to demonstrate what I and the state expected from them. However, this year we had three sample expository essays for each score point and three sample persuasive essays for each score point. So, instead of having 40 or more samples at each scorepoint on a variety of topics, we had a total of six examples ( at each score point).

Yes, teachers were told that there would be increased expectations, but there was no training on how the shift would impact the scoring. We had to figure out what the changes would do ourselves. When FCAT writes first debuted in 1994-5, the state average was below a 3.0 ( maybe 2.4 or 5). The state provided train the trainer scoring sessions so that districts could provide similar training to their teachers. I attended several of those trainings. After doing so, I had a much better understanding of how I should be scoring student work and I was not alone in this increased understanding. The next year (1996), the state average increased to 3.4 or 3.5. Teachers and students can rise to the challenge if the target is clear, but in this case I am not sure that teachers and students had a clear understanding of what the new 4 would look like.

I have no problem with raising the bar. However, the state is now expecting students to produce a more polished piece of writing in the same time frame - 45 minutes. In addition, after years of teachers being told that FCAT writes is a draft and that the scorers would score the piece as a draft, now they are scoring it as a "finished product." This shift to expecting a more polished piece does not align with everything researches know about the writing process. Effective writing involves prewriting, writing, drafting, editing, revision and publication. If the state wants a more polished piece, they should give students the time to edit and revise. Go ahead and raise the bar, but let's do it in a way that aligns with everything we know about writing.
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Marilyn Stellberg
2:48PM MAY 17TH 2012
They can't write, they can't read script, they can't hold a pencil or pen correctly, they can't spell, they don't know grammar etc etc etc. Electronics has crippled classic education nation wide.
Robert Lloyd
8:14AM MAY 18TH 2012
>>they can't hold a pencil or pen correctly<<

When I was a child and when someone couldn't hold a pencil correctly, it always seemed to be a slower person in the class. It seems almost common now for people to not hold a pencil correctly.
Jack V.
9:22AM MAY 17TH 2012
This states educational system has become one giant sinkhole. Scott and the rest of them continue to make excuses. And we wonder why no one wants to move a business to Florida? Even the administrators at these districts can't spell. This blame game is just the usual cover up. Perhaps the one thing that Scott excels at.
Robert Lloyd
8:26AM MAY 17TH 2012
To argue here and point fingers at who, what, or where this all happened is pointless. This is a corrupted system that needs to be totally de-funded. All properties need to be sold, including all the buses. Let the parents keep the $25,000 per child per year it takes to presently educate (poorly) their kids, and let them designate who teaches their kids and how it is to be done. That is accountability.

The parents should be the true 'customer' for an education system or the educator hired to teach their children. Yes, the parent. That would be the ultimate salvation for our children.

Also, with all the lowering of standards... no one dares talk about race. As we turn into a third world country, all this is typical of what will be happening, and more. It will be worse 5 years from now. It will be worse 50 years from now... much worse.

GET THE GOVERNMENT OUT OF THE SCHOOL BUSINESS.
Frank
9:06AM MAY 17TH 2012
More privatizing nonsense.

Almost don't need to comment - the very concept (and the blatant racism expoused by the writer) effectively self-destructs on its own non-merits.
Ron
12:35PM MAY 17TH 2012
Frank, are you out of your mind? There is absolutely no racism what so ever in this story, but obviously, quite a bit of it exists in your brain. The story is factual, the school districts knew what was changing in the grading, and as always, couldn't make the grade. You obviously work for the state or a school district and are trying to smear the author. It makes you look dumber than Scott....no easy feat.
Robert Lloyd
11:27AM MAY 17TH 2012
>>Almost don't need to comment<<

We can only hope that becomes your new method of operation. Why don't give your views and let that speak for itself. I gave my views... lets hear yours.

A novel idea here Frank.
RepublicanConscience
6:46AM MAY 17TH 2012
The problem might be the teachers cannot pass the test, how can you expect them to teach it. I seem to remember ". . . those that can't, teach." Try this solution, it worked in the past very well, the child doesn't learn the child repeats the grade. Knowing the teachers' mentality, they will take this as an opportunity to get more funding, so don't count the left back kid in the formula for funding.

Let's face it since the Carter established Department of Education and the liberal takeover of the Department the US went from No. 1 in every aspect of learning, including math and science. Now it ranks about 20th amongst the industrialized nations. Give the schools to the parents and let them run it - No BOE, No DOE. Taxpayers will save money, and kids will be better educated.
Conservative Voice
5:55AM MAY 17TH 2012
Not to worry Mr. Ward, this is the same mentality that has existed for years. Take sports for example. Now we do not keep score in youth sports because everyone is a winner and there are no losers. Losing as you know will hurt their feelings. It stands to reason that we should do the same for tests, no one should fail as it will hurt their feelings. It will make the school and the school district look bad and we cannot have that now can we?

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