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FCAT Writing Solution: Split the Baby

By: Kenric Ward | Posted: May 22, 2012 3:55 AM
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After all the jousting over who knew what and when they knew it, 41,000 more Florida students could have passed the FCAT writing exam if the state Department of Education had taken one simple step.

As Sunshine State News reported last week, scores plummeted because test graders actually paid attention to the basics of spelling, punctuation and grammar. Examiners had glossed over those niggling "details" in previous years, thereby ensuring inflated passage rates in the 80 percent range, even as more than half of the same students were flunking the reading battery.

Although the 2012 writing was the same as the 2011 version, the state added a second reader to verify the results. As a consequence, a large percentage of essays received varying scores. Nearly one in four of the exams had split scores of 3.0 [flunking] and 4.0 [passing].

In an emergency session last week, the state Board of Education decided to lower the passing threshold from 4.0 to 3.0 -- effectively elevating the passage rates to their previous stratospheric levels.

But if the board initially felt that 4.0 on a 6.0-point scale was the appropriate level of competence before the test, why drop it to 3.0 when the results weren't as positive as desired? Aside from political pressure from parents, educators and a screaming, ill-informed media, there is no sound scholastic answer.

Because the passing score had once been set at 3.0, the board had a more reasonable and responsible option.

Since 22 percent of the essays -- 41,000 of them -- garnered scores of 3.0 from one test reader and 4.0 from another, why not split the difference, award them a 3.5 and make that the official passing score? After all, who's to say the 4.0 score wasn't the correct one?

This middling calculation would give equal weight to both readers. The state's grading system effectively discounts the 4.0 grade -- which might actually be closer to the mark -- and simply flunked the student.

By lowering the bar a full point to 3.0, the board staged a full retreat and adopted a blatantly devalued cut score. At least a split decision -- 3.5 -- would be closer to the intended mark.

Coleen McDonald, a teacher at Forest Hill Community High School in Palm Beach County, said the scoring snafu was a train wreck in the making.

She acknowledges that teachers "were told there would be increased expectations this year, but there was no training on how the shift would impact the scoring," she told me. "We had to figure out what the changes would do ourselves." Other teachers confirmed her account, while others said everyone knew what was expected.

"I have no problem with raising the bar," McDonald added. "However, the state is now expecting students to produce a more polished piece of writing in the same time frame -- 45 minutes."

"Go ahead and raise the bar, but let's do it in a way that aligns with everything we know about writing," said McDonald, a 26-year teacher.

Not every instructor agrees with McDonald. One St. Lucie County educator, speaking on condition of anonymity, said it shouldn't take more time to properly spell or punctuate essays.

Then again, this instructor notes that some school districts, including her own, have de-emphasized spelling to the point that students are instructed to rely on spell check. Yet that computer tool is not available on the handwritten FCAT test.

As for the proper way to score the exams, McDonald suggested one other step:

"If over 20 percent of the papers received a 3.5, it means one scorer felt the draft passed and one did not. It seems to me if the two scorers cannot agree between a 3.0 [failing] and a 4.0 [passing], then the paper should be read by a third scorer.  

"If the individuals [test readers] who have been trained by the state cannot agree, how do they expect teachers to help students reach the mark?"

For examples and instructions for the FCAT writing exam, click here for the instructions.

And here for the prompts/examples.



Contact Kenric Ward at kward@sunshinestatenews.com or at (772) 801-5341.



Comments (12)

Kien Dang
8:09PM MAY 22ND 2012
They also had an emergency meeting so that the FCAT board wouldn't get rid of... why other else would they change it to a 3? They just eat up our tax money.
Groscoe
2:48PM MAY 22ND 2012
Don wury bout spillin an punkchuashun......it aint impoortant...
starfish62
2:18PM MAY 22ND 2012
Back on August 17, 2011, during our pre-school workshops we were told that grammar and spelling would count this year. It was the English/Language Arts Workshops held at Santaluces High School. Every school should have had, at the very least, their Writing coaches and English Department Chair's in attendance.

That having been said, these tests are ridiculous.
Barbara Litinski
1:27PM MAY 22ND 2012
The ridiculousness of all state testing is that we aren't getting the information we are actually seeking. No one improved or declined on this year's writing test. It is impossible to make that statement because the same students weren't being tested on the same test. Last year's fourth grader's didn't take this year's test! Different students, different tests. One needs to set-up a testing situation whereby the SAME students take the SAME test if you want to evaluate growth (or decline) in scores. You get accurate improvement information when you give a spelling pretest on Monday...practice during the week... then take the test again on Friday. Now you can say whether the child has improved or declined. Get it? All the state testing should be changed to standardized assessments that plot individual student progress such as the TerraNova Assessment. If a third grader gets a "3" on his reading test and in fourth grade also gets a "3". Has he remained at the same level or has he "improved"? After all, the fourth grade test is a higher level test! But when a school is "graded" that second three doesn't count for much and improvement is not recognized. We're just told we remain "the same".
Robert Lloyd
10:22AM MAY 22ND 2012
It is interesting here reading the comments... and everyone has a solution. No one is looking at the big (and corrupted) picture as they are not thinking for themselves. They (you) are just regurgitating garbage they (you) have been fed. THINK PEOPLE! This is not ever going to work any better than it is and it actually is most surely going to get worse.

Think hard about a better system than having the government involved in the solution. If you include the government, you are back to square one. The kids are yours, not some bureaucrat's.
Frank
8:28PM MAY 22ND 2012
Yes, we've heard your solution before - no public schools, no funding for education, no state involvement at all.

Privatize everything.

That will certainly lead to a massive decline in a well educated citizenry, where only the rich can afford education. Your solution is no solution.
Robert Lloyd
8:38AM MAY 23RD 2012
>>Yes, we've heard your solution before - no public schools, no funding for education, no state involvement at all. Privatize everything.<<

Well Frank... at least you understand the solution, whether you agree with it or not.
David Lane
7:46AM MAY 22ND 2012
I really don't think all this emphasis on test scores is important or the essence of success in life. I say administer these same tests that are given to public school students to the legislators who have mandated them and are so sure they are the measure of success. After the tests are graded publish the results including the party affiliation and take appropriate action. Reduce the legislators pay and future retirement benefits and if the scores are really low shorten their terms in office. What is good for the [filtered word] is good for the gander.
RepublicanConscience
6:39AM MAY 22ND 2012
Apparently the DOE cannot see the tree for the forest. How can you teach kids if you don't have the skills you are teaching. The problem is you have to hire from the "education pool" who for the most part go into teaching because it is the easiest discipline.

Test all the teachers, before hiring them. Take all the new prospects, sit them in a monitored test setting like the SAT test and give them all a full day of testing, math, reading comprehension and essay writing.

There is a deficiency of knowledge base in the "Education Monopoly" college program. Saw too many "Teachers" on Jay Leno's "Jaywalking" program.
Noelle561
8:36AM MAY 22ND 2012
We are tested. We have to take three, mandated exams in order to earn our certification. One of them is subject specific. Know what you are talking about before you put it in writing.
Conservative Voice
6:25AM MAY 22ND 2012
Mr. Ward it would be too easy to split the score on this test. That actually makes sense and when it comes to the education elite making sense of an issue is not in their vocabulary.

Let's face it, we will never be able to look a child in the face and tell them to expect more of themselves if you do not expect more of them. The really sad thing about all of this is the knee jerk reaction by the state board of education by reducing the test score to the old level. They caved and proved this is not about testing our students, it is about public opinion.

The other sad part is the teachers. They admit they were told that grading would be more difficult this year and the bar would be raised. Their response, no one told them how to do it. Sorry folks you are teachers and it is your job is too teach. I understand that is difficult for you but if you would put the effort into grammar, spelling and punctuation instead of bashing Gov. Scott and the Legislature then those grades may just improve.

Teachers I give you a score of 2.75
irishrose85
8:13AM MAY 22ND 2012
I would challenge you to look at the difference between a 3.0 and a 4.0. Mr. Ward has provided the link. Look at the old 3.0 and 4.0 (2011)and the new 4.0( 2012 calibration sets). I have written two books on FCAT writes and while 73% of my students earned a 4.0 or higher, I felt I was shooting in the dark. I have a master's degree in the teaching of writing and have taught for 26 years. All the research on assessing writing says that students must engage in the writing process with authentic topics. ( ie of their choice). I worked on grammar with my students every day we met, but I was fixing six years of instruction that said, "grammar is not that important."

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